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Flying Flower
My mind is closed. 
I do not wish to 
take the blame 
but, there is no- 
one else to put it on.
 
Shut. down. 
How does it feel?! 
(rhetorical question).
   
Mine, my
mind. 
responsibility all mine. 
Catch a flying flower
white petals, yellow 
inside green jealousy – all mine. 
The end of a song (but it must go on…)

Author’s Note:   This post is for d’Verse Poet Pubs, Meeting the Bar:  Critique and Craft hosted by Luke Praterredundant phrasing. Originally I wrote this a couple of decades ago, but keep coming back to it. Now, thanks to the poets’ commentary below, I have modified this write. Thank you!


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